sports injuries article feedback?

[Hywel Teague]

guys,

I want some honest feedback on my article about sports injuries

I know its a biggy at over 3000 words but I value all your opinions and I want to know what you honestly think?

I'm thinking about submitting pieces similar to this to magazines (NOT including fightmag :curse: ) so please tell me, do you think it reads well enough to be published?

cheers guys

Hywel

[Rob Hannis]

Where abouts is the article? I'm stressed with exams so please forgive my ignorance and general retardedness. I'll review it after my exam tomorrow if I get time.

Why not fight mag?

[Hywel Teague]

its in the general forum, a few posts from the top

i'm not giving anything to fightmag cos i did the chris brennan interview for them, and i said i wanted something in return cos SFUK "look after me" so I said its only right they do he same- I wasn't asking for money, I said a copy or two of the mag and a tshirt and i'd be happy. Paddy said yeah no problem, So i sent him the piece and I haven't heard from him since.

what makes it worse is when people in the gym had free copies and asked me "have you seen your article?", "er, no i haven't actually"

makes me look like a fucking muppet

i'd keep contributing for them but after that i can't be arsed. i'll stick to writing for the professionals.

thought the mag was a bit shit anyway :bored:

[iandean]

Did u get my PM ? ? ? ?

[Hywel Teague]

Ian,

i did thanks, very much. I'm glad you liked it

[Godders]

Cracking article dude.
Im gonna do a copy to the weights section too and bang it on the front page.

Especialy good for me, i seem to have something fecked all the time lmao.

[Maccavelli]

I like fight mag, if ur bummed about it just email paddy and remind him hes a forgetful bum at times

[Hywel Teague]

yeah i was speaking with jony about it last night- he said that paddy is forgetful as well. i'll think about it.

[Rob Hannis]

Good stuff, had a quick skim of it the other day. There was only one comment on it but I can't remember it at the moment (exam stress). I'll have another read of it after tomorrow. Like the greco article too.

A point raised by carl that now him and jim are out of the scene there's an opening for event reporters in the UK. On a related matter my subscription to FCF has just expired and with this isuue lacking any UK news by jim I'm not going to be renewing it.

Have you tried contacting them to write event reports for them? It'll get you free entry to uk shows, and a foot in the reporting door.

[Hywel Teague]

cheers Rob,

yeah I thought about FCF as well- it might be worth getting in touch with them about getting on the payroll!

like i said any points about the injury article please let me know

btw the greco seminar was awesome. i'll have a few more photos going up in the next day or two- i'll put them in the wrestling forum.